Punctuate this better: Royal Australian Air Force (RAAF), which did not at that stage have its own officer training college.
Hmm, I think it's punctuated correctly, or at least reasonably -- what's your suggestion?
I was thinking that "at that stage" should be set off by commas as a subordinate phrase. What do you think? And there needs to be a "yet" in there.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 03:42, 12 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I see -- I think "at that stage" and "yet" essentially mean the same thing, so how about "which did not yet have its own officer training college"?
Fair question! Actually he was on the plane in his capacity as survey director -- tweaked.
Which king was Hely an ADC for? And which queen?
The sources just said King and Queen, so I linked them instead. If you feel strongly about it, I guess it wouldn't be too OR-ish to spell 'em out -- let me know... ;-)