The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk pageorWikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promotedbySL93talk 21:07, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
Comment: The citation for the first hook doesn't actually mention the name "Hedva and David", but it does say "the name Naomi comes from the hit song 'Naomi in a Dream,' sung by an Israeli mixed duet at the time." (Of course, I'm translating this from Korean, so the title won't match up 100%, but 꿈속의 나오미 is what the song was titled in Korea) Also I could cut the "South" in South Korean if it's obvious enough she's not from the North.
Moved to mainspace by Redalert2fan (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.
Overall: Korean-language sources were checked for close paraphrasing; no issues arose. I strongly prefer the original hook over ALT1. I do not think that the lack of an explicit mention of the Israeli duo's name in the original Korean source is a significant problem. If the promoter does deem it so, however, the hook could be reworded like so:
ALT2: ... that South Korean actress Na O-mi's stage name was inspired by the song 'I Dream of Naomi'?
I also added "the song" and "singing duo" to the original hook for clarity's sake.
... that South Korean actress Na O-mi's stage name was inspired by the song "I Dream of Naomi" by Israeli singing duo Hedva and David?
I hope this nomination succeeds. Yue🌙 21:50, 21 June 2024 (UTC)
@Yue I think the modified version you listed here (not the one you modified for clarity on the top, I think that one is too wordy) is nice to me. I also re-added the filmography. Wuju Daisuki (talk) 17:00, 22 June 2024 (UTC)
For clarity's sake, I am adding the label "ALT2" to the hook that the nominator is talking about above. I restored the nominator's original hook after their comment above, so the comment may no longer make sense. Yue🌙 03:35, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
Korean-language sources were checked for close paraphrasing; no issues arose. I strongly prefer the original hook over ALT1. I do not think that the lack of an explicit mention of the Israeli duo's name in the original Korean source is a significant problem. If the promoter does deem it so, however, the hook could be reworded like so:
