I think the current lead is a great summary that encompasses the major key points of the article. I get a brief understanding of what Manodharma is.
Content
The additional information that is added I think is great. For the five improvisational forms, I would bullet those or something so it's clean and easy to read.
For "Types of Manodharma" and "Cultivating Manodharma," I would break those out into their own heading section within the article.
The information under "Cultivating Manodharma" is in need of references. I noticed only one reference being cited.
Making a note to add information on Pallayi but I know that it's on your radar.
Sources and References
All of the references listed are reliable sources, however, your article would benefit greatly with a few additional sources.
Be sure to delete the repetitive sources that are listed. May have been a formmating issue when copying over from the live article.