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Needs Improvement Articles
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Hammer Article
Lead description gives extraneous details
Sections need expansion
Lists throughout the text are lengthy and only some sections have a description
An image section at the end highlights only a few types of hammers which makes it seem like the earlier lists could be reduced
It would make more sense for the flow of the article to have the types of hammers sections and images near each other since they contain related information
Popular Culture Article
Strays from Wikipedia's neutral point of view value
May contain original research
Information in the "History and Definitions" section seems choppy because of so many short paragraphs. It may help to separate this into a history section and a definitions section instead of keeping them combined
Sections at the end need expansion and clarity as to why they are involved in popular culture
Choosing Articles to Work on
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Corset controversy
Crêpe
Forestry law
Assigned Articles for Improvement
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Very Lengthy
Extensive quotes
Switches between supporters' and detractors' arguments without a concise statement of their main points
Tasks
Establish the purpose of the article
Some of the article is dedicated to the controversy while some is more focused on corset wearing culture
Decipher the main points for each section
This is contained in the quotes and not concisely stated
Establish the most effective layout for the readers’ understanding of the information
Determine the best way to reduce the length of the article by reducing quoted material
Determine if the quote is essential to the article
Determine which section of quotes should remain direct quotes and which sections can be eliminated or paraphrased
Determine which quotes as a whole can be summarized
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Additional citations needed (tagged)
Not reflective of an encyclopedic tone (tagged)
Organization of ideas within main sections
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Sort through the ideas presented in each section of the text
Reorganize those ideas so that they are more user friendly
Adjust tone when needed
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Verify that the article is self-contained and does not rely on links
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● T h i s p a g e w a s l a s t e d i t e d o n 2 6 F e b r u a r y 2 0 1 8 , a t 0 1 : 1 5 ( U T C ) .
● T e x t i s a v a i l a b l e u n d e r t h e C r e a t i v e C o m m o n s A t t r i b u t i o n - S h a r e A l i k e L i c e n s e 4 . 0 ;
a d d i t i o n a l t e r m s m a y a p p l y . B y u s i n g t h i s s i t e , y o u a g r e e t o t h e T e r m s o f U s e a n d P r i v a c y P o l i c y . W i k i p e d i a ® i s a r e g i s t e r e d t r a d e m a r k o f t h e W i k i m e d i a F o u n d a t i o n , I n c . , a n o n - p r o f i t o r g a n i z a t i o n .
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