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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:23, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Please do not attempt to add this article you've written to Wikipedia; Wikipedia is not a product comparison site nor a promotional vehicle. OhNoitsJamie Talk 17:24, 14 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I got rid of the pros and cons lists. I am not trying to compare or use this to promote anything, I am just trying to shed light on different tools that can be used for the same purpose.
I've moved the article to draftspace: Draft:Caring_for_Elders_through_Fall_Detection. I suggest you go through the AFC process. Do not move the article back into mainspace until it's been reviewed and refactored; as is, it's not appropriate for Wikipedia.OhNoitsJamie Talk 21:17, 14 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am trying to move it back to my sandbox
I also have a question, is the reason I am unable to publish because of the four paragraphs that cover the different fall detection devices?
I made some more changes so is it possible for you to take a look and tell me what else I might need to change.(I kept information about the four fall detection devices, but I got rid of the cost section)
I made some edits and I will be moving my draft back to the mainspace. So if there is anything I need to change, please inform me.
I sent a link to my teacher to review my work, can you also take a look?
I took a look at the falls in older people article, but nowhere does it talk about IoT/fall detection deceives
My focus is not on elderly care as a whole, my article is how technology can be used to help elderly people. The article that you sent me talks about the different causes of a fall, my articles primary goal is to address how that can be stopped through the use of technology.
I am going to move my draft to the main space. Will it get taken down again or is it good to go.
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A tag has been placed on Technology Adoption towards Fall Prevention requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be an unambiguous copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from https://www.frontiersin.org/articles/10.3389/frobt.2020.00071/full, https://hitconsultant.net/2020/12/23/iot-monitor-elderly/, and https://www.safehome.org/medical-alert-systems/best/fall-detection/. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images taken from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.
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You may be blocked from editing if you post any more copyright violations, or try to recreate a similar article in the mainspace that hasn't been approved. OhNoitsJamie Talk 22:45, 16 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I understand, I got rid of all my copy right violations and I am not truing to recreate a similar article. Can you move it back to a draft so that I can make the nessecary changes so that I dont get flagged for coypright violations anymore.
You never mentioned that I violated the copy right. Please give me one more chance to make this right. I really need this grade. I will thoroughly review and make the changes that need to be made. Please just give me one last chance. I will not move it to the main space again without having checked it. Please just give me one more opportunity to make this right.
I even made an appeal to get it undeleted, because I told them that I will fix my mistakes. Please just give me one more chance
Hello, can you please undelete it. Trust me, this time I will not disobey you. Please just let me make this right.
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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a notice to inform you that a tag has been placed on Technology Adoption towards Fall Prevention requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section A3 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because it is an article with no content whatsoever, or whose contents consist only of external links, a "See also" section, book references, category tags, template tags, interwiki links, images, a rephrasing of the title, a question that should have been asked at the helporreference desks, or an attempt to contact the subject of the article. Please see Wikipedia:Stub for our minimum information standards for short articles. Also please note that articles must be on notable subjects and should provide references to reliable sources that verify their content.
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An article you recently created, Technology Adoption towards Fall Prevention, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:
" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. Liz Read! Talk! 06:30, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I will not move it to the main space again without having checked it? Your words ring hollow at this point after all of the time that editors have spent trying to help you. If you move this to the main space again, I think you will be blocked from editing. Liz Read! Talk! 06:31, 17 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hello, JoshGanesh. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Technology adoption towards fall prevention, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 01:02, 2 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]