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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 15:10, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You recently undid three of my edits, and all were improper. I invite constructive changes that build on these edits, and I ask you in the future to please discuss these topics on my talk page before wholesale removing them.
Your problem with my Pennsylvania State University Libraries edit was stated variously as promotion, NPOV and poorly sourced. None of these is true. This was well sourced by reliable media outlets. It was a very active topic of discussion at the time and is very relevant to the topic. I have no connection to the topic, so I have nothing to promote. I added additional sourcing and an rebuttal to the Freeh report, however.
Your problem with my Jessie Inchauspé edit is similarly false. Again, I have nothing to promote. As you can see in the edits, however, the author of the vast majority of that page has disclosed a conflict of interest. It was previously a mess of NPOV with almost no refutation of Inchauspé's claims, despite the fact that she is not a health professional and there have been many criticisms of her by scientific and health professionals. I simply added a small sampling of those fact-based, scientific arguments by relevant experts, with extensive sourcing.
Lastly, your problem with my Matthew S. Petersen edit is the most poorly supported. The page previously erroneously attributed opinion columns in two news outlets to the staff of those outlets. The authors of those columns are not on those staffs and in fact had current and former positions at the time that were extremely relevant to Petersen's confirmation and the opinions they were expressing, creating conflicts of interest. All I added were proper context to the quoted statements. Distance6212 (talk) 20:23, 27 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Distance6212 As for Pennsylvania State University Libraries, a blog, which are not fact-checked, written by someone on behalf of the family is a primary source and is a minority view, unless there are secondary reliable sources that support Thornburgh's analysis. Also, the ESPN source did not fully support the content so I have made amendments. Another editor has also now reverted your changes to Jessie Inchauspé also citing NPOV. See also WP:DAILYMAIL, which is a deprecated source so should not be used. I also made a slight amendment to Matthew S. Petersen. S0091 (talk) 17:43, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi there, you seem to have reverted a merge in this diff [1]. As far as I can tell, this merge gained consensus three years ago, and none of the editors in the merge discussion are blocked for "UPE/sock", as your username suggests. Neither is the editor who performed the merge. Could you please explain this revert? Toadspike[Talk] 19:24, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Toadspike thanks for catching my oversight. I have reverted myself. Let me know if there's anything else I need to do. S0091 (talk) 19:28, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No problem, thanks for fixing that so quickly! Toadspike[Talk] 19:28, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Toadspike as my edit summary indicates, I am going through some UPE/sock edits. If you happen to come across any others where I missed something, please feel free to revert me. Actually, you can do that anytime. If I have a concern, I'll let you know but most likely I will trust your reasoning and let it be. S0091 (talk) 19:35, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, thank you! Accidents happen, I appreciate the quick and polite response. Toadspike[Talk] 19:40, 2 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. LizRead!Talk! 19:07, 7 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi S0091, you put the template like resume in the article I created about Anabel Gonzalez. I changed the article to remove the template, but you put it back. This is an executive with an extensive career in economic development. What part of the article looks like this? Positions held? It is a simple overview of her career so that those who need to know what she has done can access that information. What other changes do you think he should make to the article? Thanks. Martinhusni (talk) 15:57, 8 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Martinhusni it is still written like a resume, with things like years of experience, the Positions held section, things like "where she implemented solutions to boost private initiative, foster dynamic economies, and enable governments to expand market opportunities" is entirely promotional and much of it is still unsourced. Part, if not most of this, is because the sources used are non-independentprimary sources filled with promotional fluff. Primary sources should only be used sparingly and only for very basic facts. The article should largely summarize what reliable independent secondary sources have written about her, if any exist. If such sources do not exist, then she does not meet the notability criteria. S0091 (talk) 17:01, 10 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your feedback! I'm going to make changes to the article. Let's try. Thanks again Martinhusni (talk) 20:08, 11 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello S0091, hope you having a good day? I see nothing wrong with Draft:DJ Dimple Nipple you declined, I mean reliable sources are there and if you take your time to read the references it will be fine to me and also she has also won an award which is one criteria of notable person https://w.wiki/Evv
Hi @75DD almost all the sources are interviews or what she says about herself which are primary and not independent and as per the guideline, the award must be well-known and significant which means like a Nobel Prize or a country's highest honor. You have resubmitted it so another reviewer will take look. S0091 (talk) 14:23, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Yeah the award is well known in Nigeria and also I've added more references 75DD (talk) 14:38, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Good morning. I just posted some questions in "Talk:Roy Knapp (musician)". Can you look those up and help me with them? Also, I'd like to place a reference in the "Retirement" section from a Chicago Tribune article about Roy placed after "1960" in the first sentence. I don't know how to include the entire 1978 Tribune article, entitled "Percussion's dean steps to a lively beat", since it appears on two different pages. Can you place the reference from newspapers.com for me?
Finally, now that the Roy Knapp entry has been published, what can we do to get my John P. Noonan entry published? I'm still confused by the first citation (with "Conroy, Greg" in red). It's a duplicate entry of citation #13 and should be deleted. Otherwise, I'm ready to hit the "submit" button.
Please advise, and thanks for your help.
/s/ Jeff Neuhauser 6/18/24 Jeff Neuhauser (talk) 14:10, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jeff Neuhauser go ahead and add the citation with your clipping and I will add the additional page afterward. As for the Conroy, Greg source, it was way up on the page between the first and second review. Not sure how it got there but I removed it. If you are ready, click the resubmit button or you can bypass AfC and move to mainspace where it will be reviewed by New page patrol. See Help:How to move a page for instructions, select (Article). If you choose to move it, you will need to clean up the left-over template that will on the top (delete them). S0091 (talk) 16:48, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've submitted the Noonan article again. Not sure how to "..bypass AfC and move it to mainspace...sorry. Jeff Neuhauser (talk) 17:28, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jeff Neuhauser You do that by performing a Move (link to instructions above). S0091 (talk) 17:31, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've tried twice to take your advice, trying to move the article so as to "... bypass AfC and move to mainspace where it will be reviewed by New page patrol" to no avail. I've never done this before so your help will be appreciated. Again, my apologies. Jeff Neuhauser (talk) 17:52, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hmm...not sure how to help. Maybe the issue is the screenshot at Help:How to move a page already has (Article) selected in the 1st drop down. A draft will be Draft so have to change it to (Article)...Article is 1st in the pick-list so scroll up. This also how you can change the title so if you wanted it be John P. Noonan instead of John Patrick Noonan, you update the second box which has the title. Does that help? S0091 (talk) 18:03, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I successfully changed the title to John P. Noonan! The only questions in my mind that remain are, what do you mean by "forgot ping", and what else can I do to move final publication to a fast track? Jeff Neuhauser (talk) 20:03, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jeff Neuhauser you did successfully move the draft to a new title! If you want to publish it, you will need to do another Move and this time change the 1st box from Draft to (Article). To do that, after selecting Move, click the down arrow next to the word Draft, which will present a list of options. Scroll up and select (Article), which is the very first then click Move page. As far as the ping, that was an error I made which I was correcting. If you notice in my response I did not ping you (i.e. the "Hmm....not sure" one). Long story short, you can't go back and add a ping to previous comment; it doesn't work so requires a new comment. S0091 (talk) 20:18, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The move from draft to article was moved successfully! Thank you, again, for your all your many helps. Jeff Neuhauser (talk) 20:23, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Jeff Neuhauser YES! I cleaned up the leftover cruft for you. Congrats! S0091 (talk) 20:26, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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