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Wolfgang Larrazábal
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Wikipedia:Peer review/Wolfgang Larrazábal/archive1
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< Wikipedia:Peer review
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I've listed this article for peer review because I would welcome general feedback on areas for improvement, etc.
Thanks, McPhail (talk) 16:40, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments after a quick skim:
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The lede is quite short. I would expand it to include more major events in this person's life.
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Split the biography with level 3 headings to help with readability
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Is there any information about their legacy? How they influenced something in their communities, or in history?
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Is anything named in memory of them? Roads, schools, and buildings are commonly done of this.
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Any depictions or artwork of this person? Statues, paintings, etc.
Hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 02:32, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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@Z1720: - many thanks, I will take a look at these points. McPhail (talk) 08:08, 31 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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