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There is something that is missing here. While this is poorly written, it should be noted that the USAF has added a new combat medal BELOW this Air Force Medal, which means that this Airman has done something remarkable if it is true. The fact that he was awarded this as an A1C and in a non-combat role compels us to determine if this was indeed true. If it is true, it illustrates a missing facet of the explanation of this medal and it's current explanation. Should it be verified, someone should do a better job writing the contribution; are there any surviving witnesses or images? I believe the newspaper which covers the Tinker AFB is the "Tinker Takeoff" and has a wider distribution than the Daily Oklahoman city newspaper so it should be mentioned there.
I think the individual example at the end of the article is pretty unnecessary. Regardless, it is inconsistent - was he an Airman First Class, or an E2?Isaac Crumm 02:13, 23 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]
One of these exceptional cases was awarded to Airman First Class Daryl Tempesta, while stationed at Tinker A.F.B. in Oklahoma, he volunteered over 600 hours of his own personal time in improving the living conditions of the Airman's Dormitory. He single handedly painted over 10,000 sq feet of murals. This contribution was the deciding factor of that years world wide official USAF base competition for the most outstanding base. His work was cited as proof of excellent morale and readiness of the base in general. His efforts were cited as the deciding reason in the base competition. This was a very rare occurrence, as it occurred during peace time and not in combat. As well as an E2 pay grade in under 2 years he achieved pentagon recognition which even most officers do not receive in their entire career. This may be the lowest ranking Airman to achieve the medal in such a short time. The mural was destroyed during the buildings replacement.
— BQZip01 — talk 06:26, 10 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]
The details also include that the rate of suicide in that barracks were zero, in comparison to a slight increase base wide according to the statistics. This apparently reflected the communal nature of the barracks that dated to WWII and required updating, and apparently inspired the efforts of Airman Tempesta. The barrack in reference was listed under management of SSgt Jon M Sughroue and under command authority of Airman Ronald Place. In a effort to replace and modernize Airman living conditions, the new barracks were build with separate external entrances and no common area. [Citation needed]
The wording for the AF 2274, which details the medal: The Department of the Air Force. This is to certify that the Air Force Achievement Medal has been awarded to Airman First Class Daryl L. Tempesta for Outstanding Achievement, 6 July 1987 to 27 July 1987. Accomplishments: Airman Tempesta's outstanding professional and artistic skills, exceptional initiative, leadership and thorough knowledge of graphics significantly contributed to improving the quality of life for dormitory residents. As a result, Dormitory 5903 and the third floor of Dormitory 5904 were considered "Best in TAC" during a recent Headquarters, Tactctical Air Command Facilities Inspection. given under my hand this thirteenth day of October 1987. James R Sterk, Colonal[1], USAF Commander, 552 AWAC Wing.
The biggest external factor attributed to this story is that it occurred during the Airman's enlistment that saw the end of the Cold War and reunification of East and West Germany. What's also interesting is that the date of unification of Oct 3, is the Airman Tempesta's Birthday. [2]
The end of the Cold War - caused a worldwide base re-alignment. This reflects that the BRAC should include discussion about which bases were not chosenCite error: A<ref>
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(see the help page).—Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.109.234.248 (talk) 01:08, 11 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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I have just completed the B class checklist and believe that the article could be improved by creating a more defined structure, i.e. adding a distinct introductory section of between a couple of sentences to a couple of paragraphs. Following this there could be a section on History, Eligibility, Notable Awards (possibly), etc. Also, the article lacks in line citations and a requires more references to be up to a B class standard. Once these have been added, you might like to seek reassessment. This can be done by adding it to the list on WP:MHA. Hope this helps. AustralianRupert (talk) 07:32, 11 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
For the Army Achievement Medal, What is the supporting documents that says that a valor device (V) can be put on it? Because while it can be awarded in a combat zone, it is given for non-combat related achievements. I cannot find anything online besides this website. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 166.134.58.28 (talk) 16:19, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
This entry has is listed as such.
"The Valor device may be awarded the Achievement Medal by the Army, the Navy and Coast Guard, but not the Air Force. Effective 11 September 2001, the Army Achievement Medal may be awarded in a combat area, and can be awarded with the V device for Valor also." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.138.83.34 (talk) 23:56, 7 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
The legal section looks to me like a direct quote from law, and I'm not sure what it adds to the article, since there is nothing to suggest it applies any more or less to this medal than to any other. I propose removing it, unless there are any objections?--86.15.17.142 (talk) 18:19, 7 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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This article says that the DOD got rid of the "V" for achievement medals. Is this true? – Illegitimate Barrister (talk • contribs), 08:42, 22 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]