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Not a word about removing the word "God" from the airman's oath of service. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AZ Smoke (talkcontribs) 20:06, 21 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

NPOV/COI[edit]

Much of this article is written in the tone of a public relations statement. I think the article suffers from Neutral point of view issues. The section titled "diversity" is made up entirely of quotes from Deborah Lee James herself with no citations. The sections titled "RPA Manning Improvements", "Nepal Earthquake Response", Air Force Support to ISIL Operations", "Space","SpaceX Certification", "Addressing Congressional Mandates on Force Size", "Attention on the Nuclear Enterprise" all suffer from quality issues and don't seem to be written from a neural point of view. Sentences such as "As the Executive Agent for Space, James knows well that space is vitally important." ,『James shared images of the C-17’s on her Facebook page going viral with more than 1.6 million impressions and 56 thousand likes, comments and shares.』sound self serving and don't seem noteworthy enough for inclusion.

Many of these edits come from an ip registered to 754th Electronic Systems Group, Maxwell AFB-Gunter Annex. As such, it would appear that the edits may have been made by an Air Force employee. I believe there may be a Conflict of interest within the edits made. EERob (talk) 20:25, 8 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]

After reviewing the recent edits, I feel reverting the article to the 7 January 2015 revision would be a good idea. The recent edits by ip 134.205.19.51 do not seem NPOV and should be reverted.

EERob (talk) 21:43, 8 June 2015 (UTC)[reply]


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