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This article has previously been nominated to be moved. Discussions: RM, Creation according to Genesis -> Genesis creation myth, Moved, 27 January 2010, January 2010 discussion RM, Genesis creation myth -> Creation according to Genesis, No consensus, 16 February 2010, February 2010 discussion RM, Genesis creation myth -> Creation according to Genesis, No consensus, 25 March 2010, March 2010 discussion RM, Genesis creation myth -> Biblical Creation, No consensus, 4 April 2010, April 2010 discussion 1 RM, Genesis creation myth -> Genesis creation narrative, Moved, 20 April 2010, April 2010 discussion 2 RM, Genesis creation narrative -> Genesis creation myth, No consensus, 4 March 2012, March 2012 discussion 1 RM, Genesis creation narrative -> Creation story in Genesis, No consensus, 4 March 2012, March 2012 discussion 2 RM, Genesis creation narrative -> Genesis creation myth, No consensus, 28 September 2012, September 2012 discussion RM, Genesis creation narrative -> Creation in Genesis, Not moved, 1 February 2013, Feb 2013 discussion 1 RM, Genesis creation narrative -> Genesis creation myth, Not moved, 4 February 2013, Feb 2013 discussion 2 RM, Genesis creation narrative -> Genesis creation myth, No consensus, 22 January 2014, Jan 2014 discussion RM, Genesis creation narrative -> Genesis creation myth, No consensus, 23 April 2014, April 2014 discussion 1-year moratorium on further proposals, 1 May 2014, Endorsed in this discussion RM, Genesis creation narrative -> Genesis creation myth, Not moved, 22 January 2016, 2016 discussion 1-year moratorium on further proposals, 22 February 2016 RM, Genesis creation narrative -> Genesis creation story, Withdrawn, 22 February 2017, 2017 discussion RM, Genesis creation narrative → Genesis creation narratives, Not moved, 16 December 2022, discussion RM, Genesis creation narrative -> Genesis creation story, Not moved, 7 June 2023, discussion

The result of the move request was: not moved per WP:SNOW. There is no advantage to be gained in keeping this discussion open any longer. (non-admin closure) StAnselm (talk) 16:07, 8 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Genesis creation narrative → Genesis creation story – The current title is avoiding WP:COMMONNAME for no apparent reason. It should move to the common name, per Ngrams, and the weighing of scholarly literature, i.e. 2,040 hits for "story", 900 hits for "narrative", and 312 hits for "myth". Aside from being WP:COMMONNAME, "Genesis creation story" is also more WP:CONCISE. Iskandar323 (talk) 09:44, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - I don't trust Google scholar. In this case it includes unpublished works a 34 page paper for a seminar at a Creationist Seminary[1], etc. And that's just the first page. I expect a lot of the Google scholar hits will be Creationist - GS has a lot of fringe material of various kinds. And a search for "Genesis myth" gives 2530 hits[2], more than any of your searches. Doug Weller talk 11:45, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

And "Genesis story" gives 14,000 hits by the same boiled-down methodology, see here. As long as the searches are performed in a like-for-like manner, the pattern appears to be highly consistent. In any case, narrative and story are broadly synonymous, so the change is fairly circumstantial, but it is for sure shorter and better aligned with WP:COMMONNAME. Iskandar323 (talk) 11:51, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

As examples of academic works with the proposed terminology not just in the text, but in the title, see: Noah's Flood: The Genesis Story in Western Thought, Regenesis: Lawrence and a Re-Evaluation of the Genesis Story, The Literary Structur of the Genesis Creation Story, etc. The cause to prefer 'narrative' remains unclear to me. I don't see the impetus. Iskandar323 (talk) 12:10, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Plain Google is similar: 180,000 hits for story, 60,000 for narrative, 18,000 for myth. Iskandar323 (talk) 11:56, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Iskandar323Interesting but I'm still not happy with searching, eg The Oxford Handbook of Biblical Narrative. came up and it's pretty clearly picking up hits on "story" "story of Genesis" (which of course is similar to but not identical to Genesis story and a bit ambiguous. Doug Weller talk

More worrying the first book come up twice on the first page and about 5480 times in all.[3] Doug Weller talk 14:19, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

I've taken the issue of a book showing up so many times to RSN. Doug Weller talk 14:31, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That's surely just because it's hosted at multiple scholarly publisher sites, with several reviews, which surely is actually reassuring that it is a high-quality reference source, reviewed and cited many times? Iskandar323 (talk) 16:51, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Iskandar323 That’s speculation. Doug Weller talk 19:18, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Perhaps, but so is search result skepticism. There is ostensibly evidence of a clear WP:COMMONNAME, only countered by the notion it might be misrepresentative. Unless someone analyses all of the thousands of results, the facts at face value are still better than the absence of anything empirical at all. Iskandar323 (talk) 19:27, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Doug Weller: So the Creationist Seminary prefers 'narrative', which is what the proposal aims to dispense with, so that's supportive right? If 'narrative' is less scholarly, and 'story' is more scholarly - that's surely a plus for the latter. Iskandar323 (talk) 12:13, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• Oppose as the current name is a neutral compromise that is understood by our readers. We should not use the scholarly name that is misunderstood by most readers. Creationist sources should not be discounted, as that is a NPOV violation. But even if they suggest other names, just keep it the way it is. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 11:50, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  Neutral/NPOV means neutral with respect to the sources, so if the sources overwhelmingly prefer a different title, per WP:COMMONNAME, we should be going with that. WP:COMMONNAME is a lynchpin of the neutral naming policy. Iskandar323 (talk) 11:54, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• Oppose. “Narrative” is the more scholarly term, and has better representation in the current references. “Story” is not neutral. The nominator’s reference to WP:CONCISE is silly. After so many previous RM failures, a good new RM nomination really should be expected to summarise the prior RMs, otherwise it is just a roll of the dice. —SmokeyJoe (talk) 14:09, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  @SmokeyJoe: Not neutral in what sense? This is the part no one has explained. More sources use the proposed term, so it's on the face of it more neutral in terms of the balance of sources? What other considerations are there? Where is the evidence that 'narrative' is more scholarly? Do any scholarly sources actually say that the term 'story' is problematic? The last RM was six years ago, which is eons ago in WP:CCC terms. Iskandar323 (talk) 17:08, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• Oppose – It should be Genesis creation narrativeorGenesis creation myth. The word ‘myth’ would be even better since it implies that it does not describe reality. --Martin Tauchman (talk) 15:03, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  @Martin Tauchman: Again, why? Myth is clearly not neutral terminology per the balance of sources, so that ship seems distinctly unlikely to fly. It might be a myth, but that is not the prevalent name for it. That aside, why should it be 'narrative' and not 'story', as the WP:COMMONNAME?Iskandar323 (talk) 17:15, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  Because it is a myth. That is what it is written in the very first sentence of the article. We should not rely on Google results only. We have to use a common sense as well. WP:COMMON. And the term ‘myth’ is more specific and therefore provides more information to a reader. Martin Tauchman (talk) 17:58, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  You seem to be supposing a clash where there is none, since 'story' is not incompatible with myth. All myths are stories. So the point about the first sentence is unclear, as there is no obvious clash between the supported WP:COMMONNAME title and that. Iskandar323 (talk) 19:33, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• Oppose and the very first sentence of lede explains why: there are two stories. Walrasiad (talk) 15:29, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  Huh? Narrative is also singular, the reason being WP:SINGULAR, which is basic policy. Seems moot. Iskandar323 (talk) 17:11, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Try reading the article. Also, you don't need to reply to every reply. Walrasiad (talk) 20:27, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• Oppose. Near the head of the talk page is a 16-event panel: This page has previously been nominated to be moved. Before re-nominating, review the move requests listed below. To pursue this new request, the proposer should clearly, concisely and unambiguously demonstrate what uniquely new point is being proposed that should overturn the sum of those 16 previous points. Feline Hymnic (talk) 19:39, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  @Feline Hymnic: Only one of those RMs was to the proposed title, the reasons were a muddle and it was withdrawn. Not much not to say. Iskandar323 (talk) 20:19, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• Oppose. It should be kept as narrative because that is what this article really is, a description or narrative of the events in the beginning of Genesis. I personally believe in the Genesis account myself, and as my fellow Christians would say, changing the title of this article to story would correspond that others beliefs are just a fable. Leave Narrative. Same reason why in the Wikipedia article evolution, it is considered a theory (the second paragraph of the evolution heading reads:"The theory of evolution by natural selection was conceived independently by Charles Darwin and Alfred Russel Wallace....) meaning its neither true or wrong, letting the reader decide its truth. Same should apply to this article. The Capitalist forever (talk) 19:56, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  That's an emotive, not policy-based reason, but also flawed logic. A story can be fictional or non fictional, real or myth. The five-letter term alone does not imply any of the above. Iskandar323 (talk) 20:22, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Iskandar323:, talking strictly policy based, I would still say leave narrative. This subject has been brought up so many times and with everyone opposing this, it's not going to change for some time. That's reality. Let me say again:"It should be kept as narrative because that's what this article really is, a description or narrative of the events in the beginning of Genesis." The Capitalist forever (talk) 20:28, 7 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

"events in the beginning of Genesis" seems confusing or circular to me, —PaleoNeonate – 14:58, 8 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• Oppose - The previous debates have been between myth and narrative, the two best descriptions, that are also concise. Narrative was a compromise to accomodate those who were offended by myth, even though the latter is the best description: a traditional story of a people. Only "story" is very vague, and can of course be used as part of a text as one of the variations used. As someone pointed out, there also is more than one version or story in the book, that itself was a compilation. —PaleoNeonate – 14:58, 8 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Make sure the 'G's in 'God' are capitalized. Goober112 (talk) 22:27, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done: Per MOS:GOD (and just regular English grammar), when god is used as a common noun and not as a title, it should not be capitalised. If there's a specific occurrence that is incorrect, you should open a new edit request referencing that instance. Liu1126 (talk) 23:01, 20 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Question isn't that whole 2 creation myths based on the whole Documentary hypothesis? Hasn't the consensus for the documentary hypothesis collapsed since the 1970s?CycoMa1 (talk) 16:56, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, the documentary hypothesis has fallen out of favor, but I don't think anyone is saying that there is only 1 narrative. The Documentary Hypothesis' basic idea (that the Pentateuch was derived from different sources later edited together) hasn't been completely repudiated; the popular alternatives are all variations of the original theory. Ltwin (talk) 17:11, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The Documentary hypothesis argued that the Pentateuch is a compilation of four source documents, and that at least one of them was as old as the 10th century BCE(!). The consensus collapsed due to a view that the Pentateuch is "a compilation of short, independent narratives" rather than a synthesis of extensive works, and that the editing process took place not in the Kingdoms of Israel or Judah but in either the Achaemenid Empire (5th-4th century BCE) or the Hellenistic period (4th century-1st century BCE). In other words, the Pentateuch's sources were more fragmented than the Documentary hypothesis believed, and the Pentateuch itself is not as old as the Documentary hypothesis believed. Dimadick (talk) 08:15, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]