The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk pageorWikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promotedbySL93 (talk) 20:41, 13 September 2019 (UTC)
Overall: First of all, the photograph included in the original nomination was not used in the article itself, so I swapped it out for the Hugh Ferriss illustration that is used in the article. Also, note that QPQ does not apply, as this is the nominator's third nomination. Overall, this looks pretty good...my only concerns are the presence of "this section needs expansion" templates and the handful of raw URLs for web sources in the references, which should use the cite web template. Once these two issues are resolved, I'll be happy to pass this nomination. Nice work, David! I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this article!
Hi, I came by to promote this, but I wouldn't promote the image because it is fuzzy and dark at thumbnail size. Without the image, though, the first hook doesn't work, and ALT1 is not so hooky for our worldwide audience. Then I look at the article and see a huge amount written on the Art Deco styles, with a stunning lead image of the Chrysler Building. Why don't you write a catchy hook to go with that? Yoninah (talk) 02:04, 6 September 2019 (UTC)
Added Chrysler building image to nom. MANdARAX•XAЯAbИAM 07:52, 7 September 2019 (UTC)
Thank you. Reviewer needed for ALT2. Pinging @Michael Barera:. Yoninah (talk) 16:07, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
ALT2 supported by inline citations to offline sources that I'm accepting in good faith. Good to go! Michael Barera (talk) 22:23, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
References
^Messler, Norbert (1986). The Art Deco Skyscraper in New York. P. Lang. p. 79. ISBN9783820475623.
^Barr, Jason M (2016). Building the Skyline: The Birth and Growth of Manhattan's Skyscrapers. Oxford University Press. p. 164. ISBN9780199344376.
^Rosenblum, Constance (2011). Boulevard of Dreams: Heady Times, Heartbreak, and Hope Along the Grand Concourse. NYU Press. pp. 59–60. ISBN0814777244.
First of all, the photograph included in the original nomination was not used in the article itself, so I swapped it out for the Hugh Ferriss illustration that is used in the article. Also, note that QPQ does not apply, as this is the nominator's third nomination. Overall, this looks pretty good...my only concerns are the presence of "this section needs expansion" templates and the handful of raw URLs for web sources in the references, which should use the cite web template. Once these two issues are resolved, I'll be happy to pass this nomination. Nice work, David! I really enjoyed reading and reviewing this article!
Hi, I came by to promote this, but I wouldn't promote the image because it is fuzzy and dark at thumbnail size. Without the image, though, the first hook doesn't work, and ALT1 is not so hooky for our worldwide audience. Then I look at the article and see a huge amount written on the Art Deco styles, with a stunning lead image of the Chrysler Building. Why don't you write a catchy hook to go with that? Yoninah (talk) 02:04, 6 September 2019 (UTC)
Thank you. Reviewer needed for ALT2. Pinging @Michael Barera:. Yoninah (talk) 16:07, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
