The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk pageorWikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
@RevelationDirect: I will review this in a couple hours (currently busy with other things in real life), if no one else does (but I will need to request someone else to "check my work" because I am a new DYK reviewer. GoldRomean (talk) 15:42, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Note: 125 million (hook) or 125 (article)? Needs to be fixed, I think. GoldRomean (talk) 15:44, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
Other problems: - Sources are for this building specifically, maybe change to something like "... that the San Diego YMCA building served over 125 military personnel?" (add "building")?
QPQ: None required.
Overall: I'm a new DYk reviewer, so requesting fresh review. GoldRomean (talk) 19:54, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Article created on June 16th and nominated on 22nd, so new enough. GoldRomean (talk) 19:56, 29 June 2024 (UTC)
Hook cited but incorrectly mentioned in article (says 125 instead of 125 million) (I've done some copyediting and fixed this). GoldRomean (talk) 19:56, 29 June 2024 (UTC)