curprev09:4409:44, 23 March 2018 111.92.151.94talk 21,939 bytes+356 If govt haf failed to provide water in karachi so supply sea water to public technology convert sea water into drinking water i.e filter plant r.o plant etc... can change sea water ... There is no shortage of water only political matter dont want to resolve water problem. Karachees urgs pls supply sea water we can convert into ourself drinking ..undoTags: Visual editMobile editMobile web edit
curprev03:1203:12, 21 March 2018 EMsmiletalkcontribs 20,803 bytes+100 I went back to the original source because it didn't sound right that WWD is all about access to WASH. It's actually about freshwater resources which is a bit different. Using that Jordan example as the number 1 reference also didn't make sense. I have moved that now to the end of the lead. I am undecided if the first sentence is now too complex? One could maybe break it in two at the point where the comma is.undoTag: Visual edit
curprev02:4502:45, 21 March 2018 EMsmiletalkcontribs 20,508 bytes+86 copy edits; does it work to add lobbying as an adjective? I wanted to add something that highlights the political or advocacy aspect which is different to educational.undoTag: Visual edit
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curprev16:2416:24, 20 March 2018 PlanetCaretalkcontribs 20,422 bytes−171 reordered the themes 2015-2017, so that 2018 theme would immediately follow 2017. Next year we can move the 2018 theme to the back of the list, and add a new sentence for 2019.undoTag: Visual edit
curprev17:2917:29, 21 March 2017 EMsmiletalkcontribs 20,363 bytes+43 →See also: SDGs are mentioned in the article but I think still warranted to put under see also; or perhaps add another sentence explaining the importance of water for several SDGsundo