"The lead is a bit skimpy. It just about meets the requirement to touch on everything covered in the main text, and I'll pass it for GA, but it would benefit from a little more detail about the most common forms of deep-fried food round the world.
History
"Greek's" – presumably there was more than one Greek
"Romans" – lacks possessive apostrophe
"mid 19th" – hyphen needed
"especially french fries" – no capital for French?
Technique
You appear to say, though I don't think you mean, that batter can be made with cornmeal, flour, tempura or breadcrumbs. A stronger stop than a comma is needed; a semicolon would do.
"under goes" – one word
"dehydrated;" – inexplicable semicolon
"under go" – one word
"moisture" – why link this?
"It has been considered" – by whom?
Tools
"Deep frying is done using" – I use an aluminium chip pan, not listed here, but widely used, and mentioned in the "Main articles" hatnote to the section.
Dishes, foods, and culture
In this section we suddenly have hyphens in "deep-fried". This is better English than "deep fried": for example "deep fried fish" logically means fried fish that are deep. Nonetheless, the hyphenation should be consistent throughout the article.
"doughnuts" – but they were donuts at earlier mention
Tim riley, I wanted to let you know that Winner 42, who nominated the article, has retired. Since some retirements don't last long, and people are urging a return on Winner 42's talk page (one even detailed how to circumvent the wikibreak enforcer that Winner 42 set up), I think it makes sense to hold the review open for the full week. There's also the possibility that someone else might come along and work on addressing the issues you've raised. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:20, 17 September 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Wikipedia should be grateful to @Esquivalience: for coming so effectively to the rescue of this GA candidacy. It would be nice if the lead could be expanded, but as I have said above, it just about suffices as it is for GA, and my other minor points have been attended to. I am very pleased to promote this article.
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