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:{{fixed}} Now whilst I'm not an expert on architectural styles at all, this indeed does not look like Tudor to me. '''[[User:Schwede66|<span style="color: #000000;">Schwede</span>]][[User talk:Schwede66|<span style="color: #FF4500;">66</span>]]''' 02:26, 22 May 2024 (UTC) |
:{{fixed}} Now whilst I'm not an expert on architectural styles at all, this indeed does not look like Tudor to me. '''[[User:Schwede66|<span style="color: #000000;">Schwede</span>]][[User talk:Schwede66|<span style="color: #FF4500;">66</span>]]''' 02:26, 22 May 2024 (UTC) |
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'''In the POTD text''', in the sentences now written <blockquote>Commissioned by the de Viron family, which settled in Dilbeek in 1775, the castle was built in 1863 by Jean-Pierre Cluysenaar. The Renaissance Revival castle was built on the ruins of a 14th-century fortification that was destroyed in 1862.</blockquote> there are verbs that describe actions which were complete before the castle was built. Thus, those verbs [https://www.aamu.edu/academics/academic-support-retention/writing-center/_documents/past_tense_verbs.pdf ought to be written in the past perfect tense]. The two sentences might also be combined. As <blockquote>Commissioned by the de Viron family—which had settled in Dilbeek in 1775—the Renaissance Revival castle was built in 1863 by Jean-Pierre Cluysenaar, on the ruins of a 14th-century fortification that had been destroyed the previous year.</blockquote> Em dashes suit the information regarding the family's history, as it [https://www.merriam-webster.com/grammar/em-dash-en-dash-how-to-use amplifies the context of the micro-narrative]. My brief explanation omits details about the grammatical basis for the verb tense change, but I've no more time. [[User:Catsmoke|—catsmoke]] [[User talk:Catsmoke|<sup>talk</sup>]] 03:22, 22 May 2024 (UTC) |
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That Belgian castle - should change "The Tudor-style castle..." (unreffed in the article) to "The Renaissance Revival castle..." There is nothing Tudor at all about the style, which relates to more local Renaissance architecture. Johnbod (talk) 01:22, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In the POTD text, in the sentences now written
Commissioned by the de Viron family, which settled in Dilbeek in 1775, the castle was built in 1863 by Jean-Pierre Cluysenaar. The Renaissance Revival castle was built on the ruins of a 14th-century fortification that was destroyed in 1862.
there are verbs that describe actions which were complete before the castle was built. Thus, those verbs ought to be written in the past perfect tense. The two sentences might also be combined. As
Commissioned by the de Viron family—which had settled in Dilbeek in 1775—the Renaissance Revival castle was built in 1863 by Jean-Pierre Cluysenaar, on the ruins of a 14th-century fortification that had been destroyed the previous year.
Em dashes suit the information regarding the family's history, as it amplifies the context of the micro-narrative. My brief explanation omits details about the grammatical basis for the verb tense change, but I've no more time. —catsmoke talk 03:22, 22 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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